In this revised portrait of my classmate Lizzie Dalton, I attempted to put more emphasis on her object of choice and her specific relationship with it. I still utilized an outdoor setting but decided to include a splash of greenery to add life to the shot, as the previous portrait contained a more muted background. The greener background simultaneously acts to add flavor to the picture as well as to contrast against her lighter tones. This picture is also improved from a compositional standpoint with fewer focal points to distract from Lizzie's relationship with her ring. I feel that this is a much stronger shot overall thanks to these changes.